to keep true to the work
when I'm working to capture, to hold, to express an idea,
I am tempted by early choices of wording,
I read long ago some advice
that I should discard
anything with an easy appeal,
warning that how much I'm attracted to a phrasing
might be more self-indulgence than clarity of vision,
there are furrows in my thinking
into which I can easily slip,
and that then shape my journey forward,
I can choose the easier path,
rather than breaking through the clods that hold me back
and need to be broken through
so that I am truer to the vision before me,
I am tempted by the clever phrasing,
the too common allusion,
at my best I hope
to capture, to hold, to express
that which hesitantly comes at me,
and wants to be realized upon the page.
by Henry H. Walker
July 7, ‘25